Hmm... A trance dude doing DnB?
This was pretty good. I don't think the right drum sample was used in this song... But, it's a step away from doing trance, which isn't too bad. You tried, and you did well.
My bro does trance/techno, and he manages to make some great trance dnb and techno dnb fusion songs. That, and I help him out most times XD (DnB Fanatic lol.)
I think this was too long, and I do complain about length half the time, but usually it's the quality and the mix down of the song that I care about most, and in this case, it was pretty well. I think you should pursue making some fusions with drum and bass. You never know what might happen ;D
Although, you need to submerse yourself into the genre. First thing I suggest is learning about the amen-break. This is something basic that you should learn about before pursing drum and bass, and then afterwards you can try doing somethings on your own.
As I said before, quite a step from trance, but it was great. Everything sounds clear cut, and the mix was pretty good. Love the use of the cymbal rise and crash to give it some feel. Not bad drum sample, although I would've chosen something a bit tougher for this song. But that's just me, but other than that, great job. Keep it real~
~[IZK]