Jenni-Harry4eva3's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[V] - Burn Out/Wind Up]

Awesome man.

Did I ever mention that I love clownstep? Especially ever since Twisted Individual's "Bandwagon Blues" (And parody "Blandwagon Poos by Johnny B), and same goes for Masochist by Pendulum. Best examples of clownstep. This song rocks, and there goes another rare 10 for you lol. Great job.

~[IZK]

Marks-a-lot responds:

Yes all of those are awesome! my clownstep however isn't legit, I made it in 4/4 time. It should be in 6/8 so I came up short, I do like this song nonetheless.

[Proposal 1: National Pants Day]

That is a sick beat, mate.

As you can see, I rarely give out 10's. My first 10 goes off to you, my friend. I love the beats. Leads and the pads behind them rock my eye sockets. Bass is pretty cool for a preset. No worries! We all had to use them sooner or later. You are not alone. Very awesome. I can't believe that this got bombed though... that sucks major cojones. I enjoyed this very much. AND YES TO PREPARATION P :D (Pants lol)

PROPOSAL 1 IS A GO!! :3

5/5, 100/10. Good luck on future projects there, mate.

~[IZK]

Marks-a-lot responds:

YEZ! then it is official...February 20th is national pants day!

[DXM - Spacial Resonance Vol I]

Very nice.

This is really good. Usually, when I imagine songs as empty as this, and I do not mean that in a bad way at all, I really image a drum and bass remix going on there. But on it's own... I really think that I this so beautiful and magnificent. You put the perfect feeling into the song. And I hope that special someone got that out of this song. You put so much love and passion into this. I can feel it. This is unbelievable good. Great job mate. Faving it all the way. Great job.

~[IZK]

tijnn responds:

Hehe thanks alot man! that's a really great review, you're totally right about what you just said... Although i only spent an hour or 2 on this one ;)

Thanks for the awesome review man!

[Running Past the Time]

Hmm...

Interesting... like the use of the DRILL NB sample and the use of your own drums... but that kind of kills the consistency of the drums throughout the song. The switch up is kind of weird. What you should have done, IMHO, is have drill nb come up in the beginning, then bring out your drums and mess with them only. I give exception to the build with drill nb.

One problem is the the use of those bells.... too loud, and they can get kind of annoying, and the same goes for the synth. Pitch should be a little bit lower. Bass is great. Truly is.

Spend a little bit more time with your mastering and mixing. Some things get louder and other things get softer. Much inconsistency in those volume levels... try to be as careful when you mess with those volume controls and modulations. At one point, the synth gets way loud, and then when the drums come in, they are loud, and the synth+bells stay right behind them. Have to be careful of that volume.

But either way, you are doing very well for yourself. It's a wonder how the people have kill its score, and mine still lives. I still expect it to die sometime this afternoon lol. Well, keep doing what you love. I know you'll get EVEN better at it. Awesome job mate.

~[IZK]

dicennian responds:

Thanks for reviewing. I must say that the volume thing is something I always have problem with. I also hear the problem if I listen to songs on others computers or using my earphones. I have a 5.1-set of speakers, and let just say that nothing sounds crappy on those (Yes that is in a bad way) I am though getting a new set, I am doubling the budget this time.

[Magnetic Pulse Disorder]

Well well well.

Very nice. Very nice indeed. The beats are pretty hawt. Lacking some hi hats with that kick and snare, and usually most songs can be done just like that. But I kind of find them empty without it, but this is great nonetheless. Bass is alright, I think it could be a little bit grindy. Make that happen, and I swear I will have a eargasm XD lol. This sounds pretty hawt as it is, but I bet it would be better with a crunchier bass.

I think my only beef with that is the melody. It's too high in pitch... it kind of hurts my ears a bit... and the ending was a biiiiiittt too abrupt. It would have sounded better if you built up to it. Try using a drum roll near the end, and then end it with that huge bass kick fade out. That's my only beef. Other than that, this has some great potential. Little bit too slow... it's like in the 160 range. I think this has to potential to go faster. But it sounds great as is. Very awesome job.

~[IZK]

dicennian responds:

I've never mentioned and I should not but I will do it right now anyway. I am new into DnB totaly, in fact this is my first. The pitch problem I am aware of. Shame on me. Thanks for reviewing it, I will seriously try to make a better DnB song next time.

Making it more grindy and crunchier bass was an awesome tip. I would also get an eargasm from that. xD

[Indksuyrie]

Sexy man.

Sexy drums. Love them ;3 I love the up beat feeling of it.... just makes you feel so pumped. The bass stands out very well from the synths and the drums. Everything seems to be in order. An awesome job my friend. Your synths are soooo fuxing awesome. Gotta make something like this someday XD Bells rock as the main melody, or whatever they are! THEY ARE THE SHIZ!

Heyyy, it's almost as long as my song... ooh. That was a cool way to end it. It looped perfectly :D Nice job on this one... Oh, I read on your demo that you were asking for co-labs. I think we could do a collab sometime if you'd like. I'm up for a challenge :D Good luck there mate. You're doing very well. CHOICE!

~[IZK]

Marks-a-lot responds:

yea, I'm not sure how the co-labs work around here though but I think we could make some pretty sick stuff. Thanks for the review!

[[-Radioactive Decay-] RMX]

I haven't heard the original...

But I will give you my advice anyway :D

This sounds pretty hawt. But... yeah, those synths are a bit loud. So loud, that the drums are a bit in the background D: We can't have that!! XDD Bring out those sexy drums. Bass sounds pretty awesome too, mate.

Oh, and while on the topic of drums, I noticed that this sounds like an FPC sample. Brah, you need some Amen Breaks in there! It would totally sound better :3 Cool fade out by the by. I could jam to this for a good while, but then I'd get a little bit bored because the beat is pretty much the same for the entire song. You did pretty good, nonetheless!! :D Just gotta keep workin' at it, kay buddy? Keep it going!

~[IZK]

gamerworld14 responds:

Alright :D Thanks for the info, I will definitely keep this in mind on my future songs. Thanks for the great review, really appreciated it!

-gamerworld14

[:TheB: Deserted Base]

Good...

But it turned me off. The intro was pretty good... but it was hellah long, man. And the very beginning, the transition was waaayy too quick. You should have left the pianos be for a good 32 seconds more or at least made it 45 secs longer before you transition into your second mood. It's like you have too different songs in one. I would have put that transition in the middle.

Next point: this is drum and bass, correct? For a good 1 minute+, there was nothing... but synths, bass, and that weird distorted click noise... which got annoying after a while. It was pretty random. And the way you brought back the pianos and still left that noise... this song does not feel like it is in order. The structure is very odd.

Third Point: near the very end, I hear the drums... after a good 1:30 mins of synth. I'm sorry, but that just doesn't do it for me. You are going to have to redo this one. You really need to stick to one emotion: etiher those pianos and a better bass, or that bass+noise, or a better combination of the two. You need to work this one out, and give it some more time. It sounds too haphazard and too abrupt.

As for the drums, you need to lower those volumes, or compress them so they don't sound too loud. Keep working at it.

~[IZK]

DJ-Bert responds:

yea. well i don't know anymore. i lost my music talent....

[Day19 - The rainbow hunters]

Hawtness man!

Even though I haven't followed up through the days, and I've only heard day 4, which is The sound of a sunny cloud, I must say that this inspires me to make a song now XD So far I've been forcing things out. This is way awesome mate. You're doing pretty good. Very hard and tough beats, which is EXACTLY what I love in a dnb song. Drums are eargasmic <33 Awesome job mate! I'll try and keep up X3

~[IZK]

hopeku responds:

haha thanks!

I'm doing my best with my drums and my sounds...Since I had a little drum'n'bass template (Thanks for my day 4), I had some more time to work my overall mastering!

Thanks buddy, and I hope you'll make one of these kick ass songs!

[Beyond Dusk]

Pretty hawt.

Interesting vox there. Sounds pretty awesome. What I love the most has to be that wub bass. I still have yet to learn how to do that, and it's been my main priority for the longest time. I dig the beats. They flow very well with the song. The pads are awesome. Kinda clips when it loops back there. I really like those rides there. Their chemistry with the beats are amazing. This would pretty good for background music in a flash, or something like that. Cool consistency with the beats. Just enough variation to keep my interested the second time around. Very nice job. I dig it, mate.

~[IZK]

Marks-a-lot responds:

Thanks-a-lot

I know what you mean about learning how to make bass sounds. I have been reading book after book and watching tutorials. I am finally starting to make some cool sounding basses (so worth it :)) I heard those clippings too, I was just feeling very lazy after I rendered it out.