Jenni-Harry4eva3's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[DJ5o9-From The Heavens Above]

Very, very nice.

It has great progression, and all the instruments were well used. Very nice arpeggiation on that super saw. Awesome effects that make the song flow quite smoothly and the transitions were well done. Looks like to me that trance/dance is more your "shtick" than Drum and Bass.

I thought that the kick could be a bit better. Just a bit too much cutoff on that bad boy. The open hat is a bit too low in volume, and so is the clap. I know this hasn't been mixed very well, but it's pretty well done, nonetheless. Great job!
Keep it comin' and keep workin' at it. You're doing pretty well. :)

(If you'd like, I could fix up the mixer for ya so you can get the best quality for your instruments, synths, and sounds.)

~[IZK]

Killa5o9 responds:

Thanks, you didnt have to review, but i greatly appreciate it!
Yeah, im still not the mixing master yet, but getting better :)
(and yeah, you could mix up my song if u want! Just PM me)

[DJ5o9-Aphrodite]

Hmm...

Pretty good. I like those recorded drums.. but.. they're being clouded by the huge bass line thar :( But it sounds pretty good noneless. Very very heavy. Good sub bass.

Ooohhh.. that ride on the left speaker.. oouuccchh... that did a number on my ear :/ Careful with the panning... it can't be too far or else it'll get annoying. Lol. Heard that FL vox preset XD nice. Very very tough song. Get's kinda crazy here and thar, but it's good. Keep it comin'.

~[IZK]

Killa5o9 responds:

I know, that ride was killing me!
Trust me, it used to be worse :S

[DJ5o9-Mytristic]

Ah man... This I like..

Although there are a few things out of place in this song that should not be there... like those detuned bells :/ They ruin the song cause they don't fit the same tone of the song. Although this was done pretty well. And I like it. Amen ftws lol. You need to learn some more about delays, reverbs and effects so you can give your songs more spice. Very nice drums by the way. Dig the punch on the snare.

~[IZK]

Killa5o9 responds:

Thanks man, glad you liked it :)

[Crystal(HighSpeedDrivingMusic)]

Very very nice

An awesome load of effects. Especially that *wooo* sound on the left speaker lol. Pianos are greatness, and I love that crystal-bell sound you have for the leads thar.

Bongos! They are always great in dnb songs. I thought the drums could be a little bit punchier though.. probably replace that crunchy kick with a smooth kick layered under a hard kick... and a punchier, more outstanding snare. But other than that, this is pretty good. I like it. Fave'd and 5'd.

~[IZK]

1ManAndHisForklift responds:

Hense my asking for machines left, right and centre. I am a chronically lazy person so editing the WAVs and then importing them back in just irks me ;-)

Anyway, glad you liked it - bongo's own (did notice they vanish too sharply during the introduction - needs remixing)

Cheers \\nn//

[DJ5o9-Xan]

Not bad not bad..

Haven't had the chance to review this one.. been busy working on some songs... I got my hands full now lol. I like the break you used. An interesting version of the Amen break.. not bad. It does sound like a boss battle. I wouldn't be surprised if this was used in flash for some boss battle.

Bit of a rough start at the intro, but gets right into the flow of the song a few seconds later. I like the headshot vox at the middle of the song lol. XD That is great lol. A bit repetitve, but it's great for what it is. Ending was a bit abrupt as well.. I think a fade out would have done it more justice. But it was pretty good. Mixing is a bit off, and it does get to be a bit loud... but it's pretty good. Keep workin' at it.

~[IZK]

Killa5o9 responds:

Thanks a lot!
The mixer work: im still tryin to get the hang of it, but its getting better...
And that headshot vox, i really love that part :D from unreal tournament, of course :D
I like your new song too!
Cya, and more is coming soon :)

[DJ5o9-Apocalypse Day]

Hello.

Nice nice. I dig it. Didn't expect a PM from you, but expect the unexpected as they say. So... let's give this another go.

1. Interesting intro... like the use of gate on that primary bass. Also like that grimey bass you bring in afterwards. Although... I'd consider that a bit too much bass in the least lol.

2. Ah... looks like you took my advice on the drum sample. Drill NB I see. Sounds more DnB now. But sadly, those drums are being clouded by the heavy basslines and synths. Now that you have the idea, you have to work on your skills in the mixer.

3. Volume is all out of proportion. It's all crazy. Makes it a bit tough to listen to =/ -1 there :( Try messing more with the volume knobs internally and externally. It might help.

4. Things get pretty repetitive. I'm not much a stickler for that, so I'll leave that be. That's how most DnB songs are, anyway. Gotta keep things interesting, though.

5. That's an odd fade out at the end... not the way I expected it to end. It'd be best to leave a few seconds after the bass fades out,so that it'll loop back more smoothly and nicely. Not bad, though.

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Not bad, not bad. Still could be a bit more creepy... but you have the chaos workin'. Definitely chaotic. But with that chaos comes the sacrifice of the volume and the frequency properties... and.. that's not good. :( Now you have the idea, basically, you have to work more in the mixer to get more clarity out of your song. You did pretty well, nonetheless. Keep practicing, mate.

~[IZK]

Killa5o9 responds:

Man thank you very much for the review, ill keep workin on it, heh. thanks anyway!

[[V] - Pitfall]

Guess who was right?? :D

Another well deserved shiny brand-spankin'-new 10 from me my good man. I told you that this one definitively 1-up's Grind :D And you can see the results I expected from da peoplez ;3 Great job on this song. I loved this song since you first showed me, and it was greatness.

You did an awesome job, and I can't wait to hear "We All Fall Down". Hopefully it'll soun d creepily awesome with that Ring around the Rosie wav. I found for ya. Keep up the awesome job. I have no complaints whatsoevar. Rock on, and keep on rockin.

~[IZK]

Marks-a-lot responds:

Yea I know! I honestly thought that grind would have done better. I'm the maker though so when I am listening to this I am probably hearing something different than the listener. Thanks for the review and suppport.

[Smooth motion remix]

Hmmm...

Ah.. so you are the one who remixed crimson's song... Quite an interest version/spin put onto this song. I'm not much for hip-hop, but I definitely like the beats. It added an interesting taste to the song.

Although, I feel that it's lost it's original calming touch, and gave it a more tense atmosphere. But makes for a great up-beat song. Love the spin. If crimson only had the file.. I think you could have done sone more if he had sent it over : < Great job nonetheless, mate. Keep it real~

~[IZK]

randomheckler responds:

thanks glad you liked it. and yeah it did lose it's clam relaxing feel. thats why i was pretty reluctant on changing it. but in the end, i think that it came out pretty good. i wish i could have done more but what i downloaded didn't really leave much to the imagination. but thanks for the review mate.

[Cj's Theme]

Whoa nice lol.

Your theme huh? Hmm... I wonder how my theme would sound like... Niceness by the way. Sounds quite awesome. Dig the 8-bit sexiness you put on it lol. I would like to make an 8-bit someday... in the near future :(... But anyway, great job lol.

~[IZK]

Marks-a-lot responds:

Maybe you will have a vg theme...maybe?

[[V] - Baby]

Ah dude, You didn't tell me that..

You posted this sexy litttle piece of heaven =/ I love it totally. Even the last one you sent me. Friggin' awesome man, even if it isn't eq'd/mixed/mastered/fx'd lol. Dig the song. I have no complaints, to say the least. SO, you have earned another 10 from me. Great job.

~[IZK]

Marks-a-lot responds:

Another shiny ten! I like to post songs when I feel like dancing! I felt like taking a dance on my face so I posted a song? Now I walk my three legged horse boy and smack babies in the mouth for calling my horse boy a whore.

now that I got that silliness out of the way, thanks for the review. That 10 is a 10 that is good, I mean it is even better than a 9. As long as you enjoyed my music that is all that matters.

I need sleep before I make another random comment...bye izk