Jenni-Harry4eva3's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Maximum Distortion Intended]

Alrighty! HERE GOES!

Well for starters, when the intro started up, holy shit that was amazing. Here's the blow by blow:

1. Great. Fucking. Intro. There is absolutely no complaints there.
2. All the distortion just makes up the entire song, and it sounds very amazing. Fantanstic job there.
3. As I've said to others before, it's a bit too short for my taste, but I love it nonetheless.
4. The drums go unbelievably well with the all of the distortion. Nice job mixing it up.
5. I though the breaks in the song flowed very well. You've got some talent here!
6. Lol. "Ready for the breakdown?" Awesome man. And you delivered the break down perfectly.
7. It loops like no other. This is the best loop I've ever heard. I thought it wasn't over the first time it finished lol. Good job.
8. Great reese man. All's I can say, dude.
9. You even made the vocals? Damn man. That is some major skillz.
10. YOU THINK YOU DID OKAY?!?!? DOES THIIS LOOK OKAY TO YOU??? THIS SHIT IS THE FUCKING SHIT! IT'S NOT OKAY! IT'S A MASTERPIECE GIVEN FROM GOD LOL.

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I feel I have absolutely no problems at all with this. Even with the excessive and massive distortion. It makes up the entire song. Been a while since I've heard anything that sounded so perfect, and has been perfected. Nothing that I would change. Great job man. Keep it real~

~[IZK]

Bahdshah responds:

WOOT THANKS DUDE!!!I loved it so much XD Dont worry the full version is coming up soon XD its only gonna be on my space BUT if the demo manages to get front page somehow i WILL post the full version on newgrounds for download ^^ Thanks so much XD

[Mike Reeverb - Next Level]

Whoa. Dude.

This is pretty sweet! Great Job. I can tell you made it in FL lol. (That annoying woosh sound lol. Friggin hate that. Not unless you added that little woosh purposely O.o) But anyway, HERE GOES!

1. Holy shit, that intro rocked. No complaints.
2. Eh... the drums sound a bit crackly when you start them off... Don't really like that, but it sounds awesome nonetheless! Great job with that. The patterns are pretty decent. Psh. Screw decent, they're awesome lol.
3. Like that vocal. Reminds me of one of Zero-Bass's songs. He uses that a lot! XD I bet it sounds great in every song.
4. Nice simple bass there. Goes very well with the song.
5. Problem with the snare roll up... I think you set the volume a bit too high. It kinda hurts my ears.
6. I like the synth. It's great. Simple, and flows well enough with the bass.
7. Not much of an outro, but it was great. Nice and simple stop lol.
8. Not to be pessimistic, but I feel the vocal was over-used... but that's just me.
9. Great use of percussion.
10. Loving the synth ever so much. Lol.

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Just some small things here and there, but this is a solid track. Great job putting this togehter. Keep working at it. Keep it real~

~[IZK]

[It's A Win]

This is pretty good... but...

I feel like there could be so much more done... cause it just feels like something is missing... and it feels... empty. D: You have a great piece here... just haven't done enough with it, but it's pretty good for your first tune that you've actual work and time into. I'll give you the blow by blow:

1. Good starting intro. Sets everything up for the beginning.
2. As the song goes along, it's built pretty well, but I think there's just something missing in the background. Something like a sub bass or secondary synth you could place your foundation on.
3. The drums just sound too blunt... you kinda made them sound... insignificant in the song. Trying using a sliced up version of the amen break (or whatever break suits you best), as many others have used. It sounds much more punchier, and it stands out more. But, the patterns sound great for the song. Good job in that area. Just could've stood out more.
4. Great use of the cut off filter on the starting synth. It interested me.
5. The reese sounds great. Grindy and sawy. Just the way I like it.
6. The outro was pretty good. Glad you added some variation to the ending. It was getting a bit... boring and reptitive, shall I say. But, I don't care much for repetition. Only the song matters to me.
7. (If you want the amen, I could send it to you, if you'd like.)
8. Trying doing something more with the drums, like adding cut off filters, panning, velocity. They should sound more awesome if done correctly. (Note fine pitch sounds awesome if you use it right.)
9. Outro left much to be desired, but good reverb effect at the with the main synth.

Overview:

Add somethings to make it sound more interesting. It just sounds too blunt, and it sounds empty and hallow, but that's what foundations are for, right? :D You did a good job creating it, but you need something more.... and I just can't put my finger on it. It sounds a ibt too short for my taste, cause I usually like songs that range from about 4-6 minutes long, but that's something we all do, as long as you pump out a song, it's all good. if you need help, ask some people here on NG. They're cool people. (Including myself! :3) Good luck on future projects. Keep it Real~

~[IZK]

Damnati responds:

thanks alot for the advice bro, uploading here on newgrounds is actually a great way to learn and improve on songmaking, so its greatly appreciated!

just got into the genre, also jsut started using FL, so im jsut gona keep making song after song, hopefully improving along the way :P

but yeah, thanks alot dude!

[Sashuna - Free World]

I like it... alot. Despite...

The fact that it reminds me of one of the stages in Ape Ecape 1 lol XD. It is very happy. Listening to it as I review... Great opening at around 1:30 - 2:00 It's very happy, and I love it man, I just love it. Great ending. Oh God I want to be you making this song XD You have no idea how much I'd be dancing to this song lol. It's is very awesome. And I love the effects you applied to both the drums and the entire song. You have become my new inspiration for the song I am currently working on. Gret job with this song. I'm gunna go ahead and download thsi song, and learn from it, as well as dance my ass off to it. lol. Great awesome job. Love it man. Keep it real~

~[IZK]

Rave4Yourself responds:

LOL!!

I think that may have been the greatest review I've ever gotten!

Seriously! :D

Thanks man, I'll check your stuff out sometime and all that (sorry im in a hurry, no time to write a proper response)

I'll PM ya or something. Thanks for the review, I really enjoyed making this track, glad you understood the "happiness" of it all ;D

Yea I love the end too hahaha, I feel like its not finished though :(

Anyway thanks man, oh and, lol, Ape Escape, thanks :P I guess its not done yet either ;)

Oh and PS while I was making it I had to step back a few feet and dance to it myself haha ;)

[Halloween FX]

Very good!

That intro struck my ears so well! It's very good~! Ooh... it does sound creepy. DUDE! THAT LAUGH!!! OMG... ~chills~... I need to know where you got that laugh XDDDD Very awesome track. Keep working at it lol. Keep it real~

~[IZK]

axeFX responds:

I dont know where I got that laugh... from some random sample pack

[Thin Ice]

This is pretty good... but...

I feel that the percussion just feel a little bit too... soft. And the sound you have playing that sounds like a guitar just... a bit too repetitive. But other than that, it really does go well with the airy synth you have behind it, and the little falling bass lol. Great fade out too. It kinda left me hanging though... I was like... waiting for the drums to kick out lol. But it's a great track nonetheless. The randomness pulled it all together. Great track, and keep working at it! Keep it real~

~[IZK]

Seattlesith7 responds:

Thanks, I always try my best on the songs I make. But I'm not usually one for percussion, so the stuff I make usually sounds pretty different from what you hear, which includes the fact that the drums were kind of soft.

[Time Crisis 3 : Wild dog theme]

Long time no talk dude.

This is pretty good, man. Looks like you're improving! :D That's great. It felt kinda short-lived, but it was incredible. I can hear this being put into like... into another game besides Time Crisis lol. Pretty well done. Nice to hear from you again. Been busy myself, and I just recently made a remix, so hopefully you check it out ^^; Glad to hear you still making what you love. Keep it real~

~[IZK]

[Abyssal Industry]

OMG! YOU USE FL STUDIO TOO?!

Sorry Lol. XD I don't know that many people who do, besides myself, Parathile, my brother, and now you. I have like some major questions for you if you don't mind :D I'm like.... noob when it comes to making a bass line worthy of a dnb song. Would you mind teaching me or just giving some pointers or something? I reeaally need help with that. Great song by the way. Totally kick ass. Doesn't compare to my song lol X3 Check it out when you can. Let's compare notes X3 Called 'Stranger in the Desert' by the by. Thanks in advance!

~[IZK]

S3C responds:

only 80% of the people here use FL studio ;D

to be honest, i'm quite new to DnB myself, check Navs review below for some great pointers. Just putting that out there - but if you like an element or two in this song and you would like to incoporate it into one of your tracks, I'd be more than happy to help you!

Thanks for the review and interest! Sure I'll leave you a review once I get the chance :)

[Mario World castle HEAVY !!]

Wow! Sounds exactly like it.. well the intro does.

OMG!!! METAL RUSH!!! *bangs head*.....
Good job! I love it. Long time, no talk by the way! How ya been?? :D I finally put a song out there, after two years of nothing... I feel so ashamed :P lol. Dang o.O Really heavy metal. I've never heard the guitar run on for so long like that XDDD If I played this on guitar hero... I bet I'd have so much fun phailing at it... then so much fun being able to play it XD Well, good luck on future projects! Keep it rockin!

~[IZK]

[{Intergalactic} [cnb Remix]]

Thanks to you!

Well, your experience in the field of DnB, I was able to make a DnB song, for real this time XD I pretty much based the kick&snare combo from this song... I hope you don't mind. I love this song so much, I had to hear it for 2 days long so I could get my song started off the right way. Maybe you could hear it some time, and give me some criticism? I'd appreciate it! Thanks in advance! Good luck on future projects!

~[IZK]